ian e 4 Posted March 10, 2015 Report Share Posted March 10, 2015 (edited) hi all this maybe of interest to you may not worth a look i think like to hear your views also thanks www.trapsnpens.com Edited March 16, 2015 by ian e Quote Link to post
ian e 4 Posted March 16, 2015 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2015 (edited) any body looked at this site need some feedback please Edited March 16, 2015 by ian e Quote Link to post
CHEVINFOX 3,537 Posted March 17, 2015 Report Share Posted March 17, 2015 Link http://www.trapsnpens.com/ Quote Link to post
ian e 4 Posted March 17, 2015 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2015 thanks chevinfox just after a bit of feed back as its the first time for a website and this venture Quote Link to post
OldTrapCollector 377 Posted March 18, 2015 Report Share Posted March 18, 2015 hi all this maybe of interest to you may not worth a look i think like to hear your views also thanks www.trapsnpens.com You might wish to make it look more attractive than just lists of products - with special offers etc Also - you spelt Sundries incorrectly on one tab. Discrete spelt wrong on your squirrel box. Spelling mistakes don't look professional at all. There are capitals heading some sections and lower case in others A 'who we are, and what we can offer' blurb on the splash page might be useful The Larsen Mate - is a different kind of trap - buyers might get confused It is not clear if the Spring Trap is included in the price of the 'Discrete Squirrel Trap' You cannot read the text easily on your contacts page Be careful with stating'100% satisfaction guaranteed' - what is your actual guarantee? If customer not satisfied, then what?? JMO Quote Link to post
OldTrapCollector 377 Posted March 18, 2015 Report Share Posted March 18, 2015 Professionally spelt wrong on ladder trap page Do prices include postage, if not how much will carriage cost for each item if they cannot be collected? Quote Link to post
ian e 4 Posted March 18, 2015 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2015 thanks jmo will have to have a look its only took 6 weeks to get to this maybe need a web designer to finish it Quote Link to post
ian e 4 Posted March 18, 2015 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2015 on looking didn't realise i spelt owt wrong thanks for really looking jmo and being honest thats why i asked 1 Quote Link to post
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