blackgreyhound 206 Posted March 27, 2013 Report Share Posted March 27, 2013 the mist is clearing on the moor .there stands the youth his deerhound .by his side as the cheetah rules the african plains so this dog rules the moors.when he was made the gods truely broke his mould with a hammer.as the sun rises the royal stag is seen standing on the hill the riseing sun reflecting off his coat reflecting briefly red gold .the dogs trembleing anticipation is felt thru the lead .off he is slipped across the moor the deer hound and red stag race for a brief while he feels he and the dog are as one .oh but so soon both are lost to sight .up to the hill the youth runs but on reaching the crest no chase is seen for hours the youth searches but to no avail.one last blast on the gold hunting horn echoes soulfully across the moor .that last call seems to have summoned the rain soaking wet and so tired is he as the rain falls so do his tears.in front of him is a solitary oak tree the youth shelters against its huge trunk and falls asleep. the godess of the hunt lady diana is resideing in that tree she pulls back her oak coloured cloak and looks down upon the youth dressed in purest white is she.she is full of sorrow in her right hand she holds a broken golden bow .a single tear falls from her left eye and anoints the youths head .the youth has woken diana has meged back into the tree .the full moon is out bathing the moor in its light up gets the youth now he is running into the valley there is a lake upon this lake are two pure white swans a huge weeping willow is in the middle as a soft breeze blows its branches gently caress the water.bullrushes line the edges of this lake. upon his knees the youth is holding his deerhound a broken antler is embedded in is side the stag is laying there dead his neck is pierced .diana is looking upon the youth he senses she is there and looks up she is dressed in blinding white .in her left hand she holds a silver arrow she is pointing to the lakes edge there are the spirits of the stag and the deerhound they are drinking of the waters toghether .she is pointing at the deer hound and the red stag appear as shooting stars in the sky one of a stag being chased by the deerhound .only now does the youth have gladness in his heart becuase he now fully understands 3 1 Quote Link to post
tinytiger 828 Posted March 27, 2013 Report Share Posted March 27, 2013 like plummer only more homo-erotic-(Just messing)-very well written-keep going and you might get a book out of it. Quote Link to post
decky 79 Posted March 27, 2013 Report Share Posted March 27, 2013 WHAT????????????????? 1 Quote Link to post
Astanley 11,568 Posted March 27, 2013 Report Share Posted March 27, 2013 Did the youth go on to be whin ? Quote Link to post
nothernlite 18,080 Posted March 27, 2013 Report Share Posted March 27, 2013 wheres the gsd x 1 Quote Link to post
blackgreyhound 206 Posted March 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2013 northernlite.there was not a gsd x in this vision Quote Link to post
buleetboy 10 Posted March 27, 2013 Report Share Posted March 27, 2013 he should have got a beddy x whippet. 1 Quote Link to post
BORDERSCOT 3,816 Posted March 27, 2013 Report Share Posted March 27, 2013 Try paragraphs mate - I'm f*****g knackered after that...Darcy must be shitting himself... And where's the slab sided GSD X Grey when you need one??? 1 Quote Link to post
the pikey poacher 1,157 Posted March 27, 2013 Report Share Posted March 27, 2013 what a load of shit written by some gay bloke proberbly copied out of some book from 18 something fook it off Quote Link to post
mintstick999 485 Posted March 27, 2013 Report Share Posted March 27, 2013 I enjoyed reading that, thank you so much blackgreyhound. Quote Link to post
the pikey poacher 1,157 Posted March 27, 2013 Report Share Posted March 27, 2013 you must be mad or joking stop winding him up or he will write more lol Quote Link to post
blackgreyhound 206 Posted March 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2013 the p***y poacher.like a well brought up pitbull this time i am not going to bite Quote Link to post
BORDERSCOT 3,816 Posted March 27, 2013 Report Share Posted March 27, 2013 I enjoyed reading that, thank you so much blackgreyhound. Quote Link to post
bush wacker 77 Posted March 28, 2013 Report Share Posted March 28, 2013 At least the fella slhad a go at posting somthig woth reading Beats the let's see ya dogs teeth post yet he still gets crabed Quote Link to post
Paid 935 Posted March 28, 2013 Report Share Posted March 28, 2013 I wish he would learn what the tab key is for on his keyboard though Quote Link to post
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